Of The Songs of Eru and Melkor
The Song of Eru
Instrumental: The Planets, Op. 32: II. Venus, the Bringer of Peace by Gustav Holst
Lyrics:
O Holy Ones with their hums
Hear the soft pound of thine drums.
Hear the melodies of each other
And learn to harmonize with thy brother.
Come together in creation,
Send forth your adoration,
For thou must compose a mighty theme
To fill the Void and make it gleam!
The wonderful Children of Ilúvatar
Shall come in a time known not how far.
We must be prepared
For they must be cared (for),
And we’ll make Arda strong
So that they can belong!
The Song of Melkor
Instrumental: String Quartet No. 8 in C Minor, Op. 110: II. Allegro molto by Dmitri Shostakovich
Lyrics:
The Music of Eru echoes through the void
Yet my melody goes unrecognized!
And the voices of the Ainur,
Who are not as great as I,
Give in to Ilúvatar’s control
Making him the ruler of us all.
I envy this power of one “great man”,
To create and know all
That is to happen in Arda.
Therefore, I shall interweave my own melody
Of harsh and discordant notes!
And to those who harmonize,
Thine minds will become mine
And with these melodies, I will reign supreme!
When choosing an instrumental for the song of Eru, I wanted to find an orchestral instrumental that started off quieter and with less instruments. As the song progresses, more instruments and melodies are introduced, and the music becomes louder, which, to me, perfectly represents the mixing of the songs of each Ainur and the harmonization of each instrument. The song also incorporates those quiet moments in between the louder ones, which keeps a sense of calamity throughout the song as opposed to an overwhelmingly noisy sound. As for the lyrics of Eru’s song, I used an ABAB rhyme scheme to symbolize the fact that Ilúvatar has the fate of Arda all planned out and organized. I also tried to emphasize the process in which the song created Arda, starting out as individual melodies that came together to create a landscape. For the song of Melkor, I found a fast-paced song with a lot of dissonant, “sharp” (or short), notes. Since Melkor was given the gifts of power and knowledge by Eru, the use of primarily string instruments gives a more sophisticated sound to the instrumental, despite the disorderly nature of the song. The lyrics I wrote for the song of Melkor have no particular rhyme scheme to emphasize the chaotic behavior of Melkor. The lyrics themselves highlight Melkor’s envious personality and desire to have control.
I really like the ending line of Eru's song "And we’ll make Arda strong, So that they can belong!". I like the idea that even from the beginning of creation itself, Eru was thinking about what kind of world the Elves would eventually live in. I wonder if wonder if maybe this was part of the reason Melkor rebelled, seeing himself above the Elves, yet the world was destined for them.
ReplyDeleteI’m really impressed by the depth of these lyrics! I really enjoy that you reference the idea of Melkor purposefully trying to disrupt Eru’s music of the Ainur in both songs. Eru’s song includes listening to melodies and learning to harmonize while Melkor’s song states that he has his very own melody with harsh notes. Nice job with this attention to detail.
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